Nov 21, 2011

It's time to move on ..


Something is troubling you, unsure of what. There were times when you used to say write a verse for me, coz that used to make you smile.Today couldn't help but write what came to my mind when I saw something 'very painful' .. This is for you, and hope you are reading this .. Not sure if that would make you smile, but still hope that helps, in some way ..

All I could see now
is some pain you are trying to hide 
 seeking some peace
 your words can't hide plight
I am clueless 
as to what to say you 
for you have been the only 
stronger in us 
Some knots are clogged inside 
let the heat around you 
melt them and make you feel light 
In those traffic of thoughts 
where you are wandering alone 
masking the hurt and emptiness 
behind that cheerful tone 
My dear wisest friend
tell me how can I make you smile ?
which of the words 
will stop the tear to slide ?
You are not the one to be blamed 
if something doesn't workout 
the way you thought 
you are a fighter I know 
till the end you always fight
Yes, for no fault of you 
people do leave you mid way 
yes that twinges 
agreed, that will leave you grey 
But my dear friend 
don't forget to smile 
for every battle needs that curve 
to make you feel alright 
I know you don't need 
my advice 
for you brim with positive spirit
and are wise 
Yet I can't help 
seeing you helpless 
its not you
hopeful yet hopeless
Yes I am not aware 
of what you are going through
I have been selfish 
absorbed in my own worries , true
There is one thing 
I would like you to say
whatever be the circumstances
how much ever deep the heart breaks be 
look above 
there will be a soul you can see 
who is looking after you 
like a child 
she wants you 
really wants you to smile 
for she is away
yet she is nearest 
she is your dearest 
who whispers in the singing breeze
who is your ink
who is your muse, which she often tease. 
Nearby is an angel 
who loves you lot 
I know you haven't forgot 
yet I hope they give you all strength you need 
let their presence be the seed 
for the new life 
that's waiting to sprout 

6 spoke to dreamy:

DeLi said...

i like the positive way this poem was concluded

Shauna said...

true longing to help a friend -
you wrote this one from the heart.

The Write Girl said...

This is a beautiful poem. I'm sure it will inspire your friend.

adreamygal said...

DeLi, it had to, coz it was meant for someone :)

Shauna, yeah, I hope it helps him :)

Write Girl, really hope it does :)

Olive Tree said...

I hope your friend hears your thoughts. You're talking from your heart here. It's hard to see someone you love going through suffering and you feel hopeless at times seeing your friend like that. May both of you find peace eventually.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Awesome poem :)
written straight from the heart :)

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