Obsessed with death yet
insecurities slip, like
sands in hourglass
Haiku Heights, One Single Impression
PS : I wasn't aware that my comments wasn't working. Thanks to Deepak for notifying me that. Now its in form :)
PS : I wasn't aware that my comments wasn't working. Thanks to Deepak for notifying me that. Now its in form :)
very creative use of the two prompts... nice one ~
ReplyDeleteGreat words and I love that pic.
ReplyDeleteInnovative combination, well written.
ReplyDeleteLeo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
love this one, smart take.
ReplyDelete:)
Cleverly constructed to incorporate both prompts into one!
ReplyDeleteHank
Wonderful thought! the obsession with death and the fear of it.. excellent dear!
ReplyDeletevery creative contrast ~~
ReplyDelete@Grace, thank you :)
ReplyDelete@Anthony, glad you like it :)
@Leo,was it innovative ? :P
@Morning, thanks a lot :)
@Kaykuala, with inclusion of current mindset :)
@Krishnapriya, yeah, both of them comes at same time :P
Becca, thank you :)
This is so so so good :) I love this one...
ReplyDeleteLike the picture. Good Haiku.
ReplyDeleteinsecurities slip, like sands in hourglass -- PERFECT!
ReplyDeleteAmbitious and interesting.
ReplyDeleteinteresting words...!!
ReplyDeleteimaginative... really like it
ReplyDeleteClever haiku and good accompanying image: well done!
ReplyDeleteI loved seeing slipping insecurities.. excellent...
ReplyDelete@Meow, thank you so much :):)
ReplyDelete@Harshad, the credit goes to google :P
@Judith :)
@Sandy, thanks!:)
@Sandra, are they ? ;)
@totomai, glad you did ! :)
@Adam, thanks! :)
@Ramesh, yeah makes us happy, isnt it ? :)
Interesting thought. Loved the picture.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Hey D.G, I like your senryū.
ReplyDeleteSeems to me like a self fulfilling obsession.
You wrote:
Obsessed with death yet
insecurities slip, like
sands in hourglass
..
Cassiopeia, credit goes to artist :)
ReplyDelete@Jim, Thanks Jim ! I guess many of us can relate to that :)
very true :) ....
ReplyDeletelines complementing each other...
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