This is very unique. And about the extra syllable ... there are those Haiku experts who do not remain strict with the 5-7-5 because the Japanese translated Haiku does not translate in that manner. Also, I never really know whether to count a word with "ed" at the end as 2 syllables. I often say it as one.
A most perceptive haiku. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteAmazing and how true!
ReplyDeleteHank
Incredible haiku!
ReplyDeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteExtraordinary... what a take on Urn..
ReplyDeleteIntense message using the prompt!!!
ReplyDeleteIntense capture of the prompt!
ReplyDeletetrue indeed, When our mind is heavy heart is no way in position to take its own stand :)
ReplyDeleteYou can dig on each word. Excellent creation!
ReplyDeleteAnthony,kaykuala,Judith,Valli, Ramesh, Becca thanks ! :)
ReplyDeletemeethimirchi, Strange, but true, both are opposites yet dependent:)
Saru, that indeed was a compliment ! thanks:)
Isn't that so true. nice haiku.
ReplyDeleteThis is very unique. And about the extra syllable ... there are those Haiku experts who do not remain strict with the 5-7-5 because the Japanese translated Haiku does not translate in that manner. Also, I never really know whether to count a word with "ed" at the end as 2 syllables. I often say it as one.
ReplyDeletecool & on target.
ReplyDeletenice.....enjoyed it.....
ReplyDeletehere is mine
http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2011/11/urn.html