Dec 3, 2011

Pieces


Dreams float in dark space 
a gravitational pull
they fall in pieces 


Wings of Ink ,
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14 spoke to dreamy:

  1. A sad thing to happen to dreams ~

    Nice one ~

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  4. At times.. Science and pain goes together to create a lovely Haiku! like this one..!

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  5. gravity pulling apart dreams, interesting concept

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  6. That's why I always feel that dreams need to have wings...rather than fall, let them fly if they want to.. beautiful write this..

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  9. Dreams of a happy ending is what we all expect as we wake up

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  10. Creative thought. Nicely worded.

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  12. Lovely Haiku. The only sad part is they are made to fall apart.


    Melanie

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  13. Greetings:

    how are you today?

    great big thanks for your support and attention to poets rally,
    hope to see you share any time around the year…

    stay blessed, your talent rocks.
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    xoxox

    amazing Haiku.

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  14. Excellent writing…
    Happy Holidays….
    I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
    1 to 3 or more are welcome.
    no theme.
    Hope to see you in,
    Smiles!

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